Post 1. Claim/Main Argument
The Negative Effects of Using Mobile Phones
Post 2, 3 & 4. Sub-Claims – Evidence + Warrant
- Less personal connection = friendship, personal relation
- Becoming distracted = while driving, walking and studying
- Harmful to Health = increases stress level, creating disease from bacteria and causing problems with vision
Post 5. Counter Claim + Rebuttal
Even though using mobile phone is easier and more convenient. However, there are negatives to using it as it’s making us less active.
Post 6. Conclusion
The use of mobile phone is causing negative effects, as we are less interacting with each other, getting distracted and affecting people’s health.